There will be another chapter of my life very soon but as it’s Halloween and I missed posting a blog last week. Here is a little devilish short I wrote for Halloween.
There is a urban legend in this town about a woman called Eve.
Little is known about who she was although some people say she just suddenly showed up in town one day, her family moving here in mysterious circumstances. Others reckon she was the daughter of that crazy woman who lives up by the forest. It don’t really matter.
Her description changes depending on who you ask. Some say she was blonde, other brunette although the most common description is of a redhead with the most perfect emerald eyes you have ever seen.
Whoever tells you this tale there is no doubting she was pretty and caught the eye of many men. Yet she never gave in to their advances. Eve, you see, was a virgin and whatever her reasons she wanted to keep it that way.
The folk who remember her describe her as being a quiet girl…a little strange even. She pretty much kept herself to herself. At school she would often sit alone… Yet she was so darn pretty it was difficult for guys to leave her alone.
There was this one guy who never gave up. Would try everything he could to get with Eve. Whether through sheer persistence or charm he managed to get her to agree accompanying him to a Halloween party.
She must have been eighteen at the time and it was agreed they would meet at his house. So there she was at his front door dressed as some sort of sexy witch; others say it might have been a devil or even a fairy but you get the idea.
Anyway, turns out there was no party, this guy just wanted to get Eve alone. He didn’t force her to do anything, you see as it turned out Eve had rather fallen for this guy. She was in love with him.
He was handsome and had shown her kindness so when he suggested they should have sex… well.. Eve felt she was giving her virginity to her one true love.
It sounds a little sappy but Eve was a bit of a romantic and she had been saving herself for that one special person. Her virginity was to be that guy’s treat.
They had sex. It was afterwards when they were getting dressed she kissed him and asked if he loved her with all his heart.
Turns out, however charming this guy may have been, he was a bit of a dick and he just laughed saying something like “No. It’s just sex.’
Well now poor Eve was devastated. She’d just giving her one true gift to someone who most certainly did not deserve it. In tears she ran out of the house. Neighbours reported hear her crying “You tricked me.”
By this time it must have been the dead of night. You know how cold those October nights get in this town.
We’ll, this all took place before cell phones so poor Eve, distressed as she was, had to walk all the way home. It must have been a good two miles.
She never made it home.
The Police searched for her. Even the town all came out looking but no one ever found her. Before long everyone had forgotten about Eve and what may have happened to her.
Then on the fifth anniversary of her disappearance strange things started to occur. People say that as Halloween drew to a close those who were mean of heart would hear a knock on the door. A slow three taps. It was Eve and she would say “Treat me or Trick me”…….
“Wait. Wait. Wait.. Have you come up with this lame story ‘cos I was mean to those trick and treaters earlier” laughed Marvin down the mouthpiece of his headset.
“No” replied his friend, Leo “The legend is true. You gonna let me finish it.”
“Forget it man. It’s getting late. You suck at this game and you suck at telling stories. Night.”
Marvin turned off his games console and closed his eyes.
Tap. Tap. Tap
He awoke unsure if that knocking was on his front door.
Tap. Tap. Tap.
It was definitely his door. Too lazy to get out of bed he bellowed “Who’s there?”
There was no answer just another Tap. Tap. Tap.
He checked the time, it was way too late for anymore trick or treaters. Besides he had scared most of them away.
Annoyed that his slumber had been disturbed. He let out a large breath as he lifted himself out of his bed, padding heavily to the door. Whoever it was knocking at this unearthly hour would be getting the full force of his fury.
He hesitated opening the door. He didn’t have a spy hole and therefore had no idea who was on the other side.
Tap. Tap. Tap
Marvin jumped a little at the sound of knocking. “Who’s there?” he asked, his voice wavering slightly.
“Trick me or Treat me” came the feint reply from behind the door.
Marvin only caught the words ‘trick’ and ‘treat’ and presumed the delicate voice must be that of a child.
“Fuck off. You little shit” he responded and went to go back to his bed.
Tap. Tap. Tap.
“I said FUCK OFF” bellowed Marvin.
There was silence and satisfied he would not be disturbed further he walked towards his bedroom.
Tap. Tap. Tap
In a rage Marvin strode towards the door and yanking down the handle he was fully prepared to give whoever it was on the other side his full fury.
As he opened the door he was faced not with an obnoxious child but a beautiful woman.
She had fiery red hair, emerald eyes and wore a witches costume; stripey stockings, ankle boots and short skirt all finished off with a pointy hat.
Eve? Surely not. It was a trick.
Marvin began to laugh. He had no idea how Leo had done it but he must be congratulated for effort.
With a smirk on his face Marvin looked at ‘Eve’.
“Trick me or Treat me” she asked.
Marvin had not let Leo finish the rest of the story but it was obvious the correct answer was ‘Treat Me’. That’s what made his stupid story so lame. Who would say ‘Trick’?
“Treat you” Marvin replied with a smile.
Eve immediately kissed him which Marvin gratefully received. Women did not kiss him often and although he knew this had all been arranged as a joke by Leo he would take it.
Eve broke away the kiss and walked towards his bedroom. She looked back and gestured for him to follow.
Marvin followed her and once there she indicated for him to climb on the bed. He was waiting for the punchline to come but it didn’t.
If this was to be an elaborate practical joke then he was unsure how having his penis in Eve’s mouth became part of it. Not that he was complaining he had never found himself in a woman’s mouth before.
He enjoyed it and grew hard. She stopped sucking him and sat astride him, lowering herself upon his small but firm manhood. She slid up and down, her nails digging into his fatty chest.
Marvin had no idea how much this was costing Leo or indeed when the inevitable joke would occur. Maybe he was just being a good friend. Either way Marvin was going to enjoy it while he could.
She grabbed his hands and moved them up to her breasts so he could fondle them whilst she continued to ride him.
Marvin had never been inside a woman before. It was warm and he could feel the wetness on his cock as she continued to slam down upon him.
He was in heaven and did not want this pleasurable experience to end. Although he doubted he could last much longer inside such a beauty.
.…. Of course most guys always agree to Treat her and once they do she gladly gives them her body. I mean we are talking about the best sex you have ever had…
Marvin was close to orgasm. He wished he had more staying power but the pleasure was becoming too much.
… When the guy is about to orgasm Eve leans in and whispers..
“Do you love me?”
Marvin nodded enthusiastically. There was no one he loved more than this beauty on top of him.
“With all your heart?”
…. That’s what she asks next. The guy is having so much fun they’d agree to anything. You see she learned where she went wrong before. She asked the guy after sex, once he got what he wanted….
Marvin nodded and let out at breathless ‘Yes. Yes. Yes’. At that moment he could not be happier. The world could end now for all he cared.
... You see in all those years she was left heartbroken and humiliated, she regretted not asking the question sooner.
She knows now to ask it just before that point of release. When the guy’s passion, lust, desire is all building up inside him.
Eve believed that this is the point when the human spirit is at its most honest. When heart and mind become one organ pumping honesty through the body.
You see, separately the mind can play tricks and the heart when working alone does not always know what it wants. But together, that shows the true essence of a person.
It’s then, just at the moment when the consequence of a guy’s passion is about to flow that she reaches in. Buries her hand deep inside the chest and pulls out the still beating but truthful heart of the guy….